viernes, 13 de febrero de 2009

I'm Ana Bolado.I was born in August 15th in 1989 in Tampico Tamaulipas.I spend all my childhood there.When I was 4 years I went to the kinder garden and it was the start of my education.I was there for two years an then I went to the elementary school.The elementary school's name was Granja Club de Leones.I stayed there for five years in wich ones I studied a lot and I participated in some contests like poety and reading.When I was 11 years old I was moved to other shool wich was nearer of my house.I spend my last elementary school`s year there.Then I went to the junior high and spend three more years there.While I was there I made a lot of friends, it was a good stage in my life.After that I went to the high school and I met new friends.When I was there I went to diferent trips with my friends.I enjoyed a lot that time.Actually I'm mayoring accounting in the UAT.Also I'm studying english.And this it. :P

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  1. Corrections:

    ¤in August 15th in 1989 (on August 15th, 1989)

    ¤I went -to the kinder garden- (to kindergarden)

    ¤I went -to the elementary school-. (to elementary school)

    ¤I stayed there for five years -in wich ones- I studied a lot (where)

    ¤I was moved to other shool wich was -nearer of- my house. (closer to)

    ¤I went -to the junior high- (to junior high)

    ¤I went -to the high school- (to high school)

    ¤I enjoyed a lot that time. (I enjoyed that time a lot, do not separate verb and object!)

    ¤-Actually I'm mayoring accounting in the UAT-. (I'm currently majoring in accounting at the UAT, actually=de hecho, en verdad, realmente)

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